anyways… she said everything about the story i have to say, and then some, so about that piccie at the top… it looks like soya, not asahi. just a tandom little comment.

I completely understand what you mean about school and big writing project (whether independant or school induced) taking a lot out of you creatively. I just now got back into writing (really writing for my own enjoyment) for my own story, thanks to you and the chapter you sent me btw since it inspired me.

No worries about missing anything. It was really good, Wren. Everything else didn’t matter as much as the issues with the plot. And actually I’m glad you left a lot of the original material in there, cause I really liked it which is why I asked you to expand on it. And the issues with the Ledge, both very creative and much easier to visualize.

Aw, thank you Wren *feels special* I’m glad to be back to editing too. I always have fun editing Dreigiau and also reading your writing about the character’s lives and adventures always motivates and inspires me to get cracking on my own. So also, thank you Wren for the opertunity *beam*

So, anyhow, big reliefe that it did work. I wasn’t so sure even once I got it done if that’s what it needed to be or not. Thanks for all of your help, Pen! I’m really glad to have you back in the editor’s seat for Dreigiau. It always makes me feel like I can push my writing a step further than the rough draft… and I can’t always do that unless someone gives me that nudge.

*warm fuzzy feelings continue*