• Ch9-7: Drei’distau

    Posted on August 29, 2008 by in Chapter 09
    Jerking back, AsaHi gave a little cry of alarm.

    Jerking back, AsaHi gave a little cry of alarm.

    It had become an everyday habit for AsaHi – an early afternoon walk with Zemi.

    Sometimes he would take her through the deep caverns of the expanses of Wyndor. Other times, he’d introduce her to the tall mountain ranges and the sparkling waterfalls. For days they planned to picnic, they would hike down into the valley below.

    Something about it invigorated her. Reminded her of simpler times when she would travel across the wilderness around Nefol. It reminded her of happier childhood days and the walks that she would sometimes take with SoYa – only when he wasn’t too busy dealing with the School.

    Sometimes AsaHi would tell these things to Zemi. Sometimes she would talk about herself and the short-lived time of her past.

    But most of the time he would talk… because she always had a million questions waiting just around in the corners of her mind. It was much to her surprise that the Dreigiau would speak quite freely to her, even of things that were far beyond her comprehension.

    She loved it most when Zemi would talk about their world and the Earthians from his perspective — everything took on a magical hue as he described them. There was always something within his voice, something within the words that he chose… AsaHi knew, without a doubt, the Arweinydd held overwhelming compassion for her people.

    Today she sat waiting for Zemi outside on the Ledge — a rock shelf that hung out over the face of the mountain. It was a small area in comparison to some of the rooms that burrowed deep into the heart of the mountain, only about three Dragon spans wide. In the past, AsaHi had seen the Dragons using the Ledge as a place to take off into flight.

    I wonder why Zemi wants to meet me here.

    Compared to the rest of Wyndor, the Ledge had very little to offer in the way of beauty. It was a flat, white table of stone. To one side, a single Dragon-sized arch opened back into the face of the mountain. She could just make out the dim winding hall that eventually connected to the Great Chamber. To the other side, there was nothing but the spread of blue sky and the whistle of the wind.

    He’s always up to something strange.

    She gazed at the arched doorway with a little sigh. Zemi was late.

    I suppose I’ll just have to wait and see.

    Settling down on a small rock outcropping, she stared up at the passing cloud fringe. Just as she was allowing her mind to drift off into daydream, a tremendous sound shattered the peace of the quiet afternoon.

    “Surprise!”

    A large white Dragon head suddenly thrust from the arched doorway. Great fangs gleamed as the lips peeled back, the maw opening wide… in what appeared to be a Dragon’s laugh. The voice that came from the beast was Zemi’s, though a bit larger and more gritty in sound.

    Jerking back, AsaHi gave a little cry of alarm. It took a moment before the situation registered on her. Then all she could do was shake her head, “Z-Zemi!?”

    “That’s right!” Big Dragony smile again. “Are you surprised?”

    “Surprised… is not the word for it…” AsaHi let out a long, deep breath.

    “Did I scare you? I didn’t mean to,” the great head lowered, chin plopping on the ground. Like an enormous puppy-dog. The large teal-flecked eyes watched her, strangely expressive for being so animal like.

    “Just startled,” she told him, getting slowly to her feet.

    Until that moment, AsaHi had only seen Zemi’s Dragon form from afar. Except for the one time in the Host Gate, though that had only been a hazy illusion.

    Still, there’s something about him that is completely Zemi-ish, even as a Dragon.

    The white Dragon seemed to be physically built very much like the others. Though his mane was wild and unkempt, falling across his forehead in mischievous clumps, his form was sleek and strongly made. Despite the overwhelming feeling of power that he bore, his manner remained playful and openly friendly.

    Even as a Dragon, it’s hard not to like him.

    “Disappointing,” AsaHi teased, crossing her arms and pushing her own feelings out of the picture.

    “Whaaaaat?” Zemi’s ears perked, tail lashing playfully. “I know you’re not talking about me! I’m the finest Dragon around!”

    “I was told that you were supposed to be absolutely gigantic as a Dragon,” the girl grimaced at him, spreading her hands to accent the words.

    “I can be?” Zemi told her.

    “You aren’t now,” she pointed out.

    “That’s because I don’t need to be,” he gave a snort. “My form isn’t limited in dimension, thus I can choose how I want to appear. Sometimes it’s good to be a small Dragon. Sometimes it’s good to be a big Dragon. Today, I’m somewhere in between.”

    “And why’s that?”

    “Because we’re going flying!” Big fangy Dragon grin, again.

    “Flying?” AsaHi stared at him, caught up in the sudden adventure of it all.

    “Brunswik told me you didn’t have any flying experience before this. Which is a real shame. You’d make a fantastic Dragon rider,” he encouraged brightly.

    “Why do you say that?”

    “Just because I know you will,” Zemi answered. Then added as an afterthought, “You and Dragons get along. You know that, right?”

    “Yeah…” the girl peered up at him quietly.

    No one had ever spoken it aloud before. But somehow, she did know it. There was something unusual between her and the Dragons. She had felt it for the very first time when she had met the Dragons on the Cleft. But she hadn’t known why she felt that way.

    “So it would do you some good to know how to ride, don’t you think?”

    “I guess so?” AsaHi answered after a moment of thought.

    “Or do you not want to learn?” Zemi asked, sensing her hesitance.

    “Yes, yes, of course I do!” she covered her tracks quickly. She really was very interested. Not everyone was offered the chance to learn how to ride a Dragon in their lifetime, after all.

    “Well, then, what are you waiting for? Hop on,” he grinned at her.

    AsaHi walked forward slowly, running her tongue over her lips. The closer she came, the bigger Zemi seemed to loom. Even though he was sprawled haphazardly, harmlessly there on the stone floor. Even though he claimed to merely be a medium-sized Dragon.

    I’d hate to see what he considers to be large…

    The girl squinted, trying to figure out how to make her way to the great ridge of the Dreigiau’s back – it was a startlingly long way up. AsaHi reached out and gingerly braced her palms against the crook of one of Zemi’s forelegs. But feeling the warmth of living Dragon under her fingers, she couldn’t bring herself to climb, thinking about the pain of boot scrapes along his skin.

    “AsaHi,” Zemi tilted his head back at her, face strangely endearing and amused. “Let’s start on page one, shall we?”

    “Okay…?” she answered, not knowing what page one was about.

    “I’m a big, growly, nasty, thick-skinned beast,” he grinned brightly. “If you step on me, it’s not gonna hurt. And besides that, I’m Arweinydd. You can’t hurt Arweinydd. So just relax and climb up. Okay?”

    “Okay…” AsaHi drew a deep breath, then began to scrabble up the side of Zemi’s shoulder on her hands and knees. She quickly found that catching the hinge where the wing met the shoulder blade was an excellent place to hoist herself up. So she did.

    For a moment, she was suspended, stomach balanced on the crest of the Dreigiau’s back. Her head was tilted down the other side. Her feet still dangled, pushing from behind. Struggling to grab hold of the thick white mane, the girl managed to gather herself up into a mounted position.

    Finally, AsaHi lay sprawled there, a little spot of tension on the Dreigiau’s wide shoulders. Her hands were shaking slightly.

    “There you go,” Zemi said. “Now just relax… calm your mind and let it all go.”

    His voice rumbled, the vibration rippling under her and up through her entire body. She could feel the welling of great, deep breaths and the vast thrumming of his heart. Then every little motion, every shift in balance, became one with her own.

    Within that moment, AsaHi felt more connected to the Dreigiau than she had ever been to anything else in all her time.

    “Ah… now you see… you’re beginning to find it,” he murmured.

    His voice did not need to be loud for her to hear it. Perhaps Zemi didn’t even need to speak. The connection between them was so gripping, she wondered if she might even begin to sense his thoughts.

    “It has been waiting for the right time, AsaHi. It has been there inside you all along,” the sound was now within her ears. She couldn’t tell if it was a real voice at all. “It just needs a certain situation to waken it.”

    “Waken what?” she ventured. Her words were groggy and distant to her ears.

    This feeling, he means. But what is it… how do I know about…?

    AsaHi simply knew – it was as if she had been riding Dragon-back her whole life. Her hands gripped the mane firmly, her knees knew the balance, her body moved easily with the Dreigiau as he rose and stretched his wings wide.

    As if her mind was opening, releasing secret things. Things that had always existed but had never spoken to her before.

    “You share a special bond with Dragon-kin. It is known as Drei’distau,” Zemi answered as his great wings began to sweep back. Very smoothly, he lifted up from the ground, rising gently towards the brilliant sky.

    AsaHi watched the world shrink away beneath them. There was no fear. There was no worry. There was only herself and the Dreigiau… and the glory of Dragon flight shared between them.

    The scent of clear air mingled with the warm fragrance of the Dreigiau. His sweeping white mane blurred through her vision, shifting across the deep azure skies. It only took a moment before they had risen above the pillared peaks of the clouds. Then they were hidden away in their own private realm, far above the vibrant curve of the earth.

    Neither of them spoke. Neither of them had to. Motion of Dragon and motion of girl were one and the same. They were locked into a single thought. Feeling with the same heart.

    As the emotion rushed through her, the vast realization rang through. It came, both terrible and wonderful at the same time, leaving a mark of numbness imprinted upon AsaHi’s mind.

    I have feelings for Zemi.

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8 Responsesso far.

  1. KJ says:

    *pokes AsaHi* Certainly took you long enough!

    *warm fuzzy feelings continue*

  2. Aywren says:

    Now the trouble begins.. heh. :D

  3. Pen says:

    Whoa, wow, omg. *Is completely blown away* I can’t get over how that turned out, especially the end. Just, wow, it really hits you. I’m floored. It’s really powerful, Wren, possibly the most powerful moment I’ve read in Dreigiau yet. I’m still wow’d by it and it’s been about twenty minutes since I read it and I’m still going on about it. *pride* Go Wren!!

  4. Aywren says:

    I’m so glad you think it worked this time around, Pen! Your ideas made a lot of sense to me, I just had to find a way to put them into play. I really wish I could have gotten into even more detail with the areas you wanted me to, but I’m just really sorta blah on writing after the Mini NaNo and now that this Spanish class is kicking my butt.

    So, anyhow, big reliefe that it did work. I wasn’t so sure even once I got it done if that’s what it needed to be or not. Thanks for all of your help, Pen! I’m really glad to have you back in the editor’s seat for Dreigiau. It always makes me feel like I can push my writing a step further than the rough draft… and I can’t always do that unless someone gives me that nudge.

  5. Pen says:

    No problem, I’m glad you thought they were good. Whenever I make a big suggestion like that I’m always like “Oh man, I hope she doesn’t think I’m nuts.”, but this time around I have to credit what I learned in Mythology class a bit. After I started thinking in terms of symbolism then I started to see how perfectly both plot points mirrored/complimented each other.

    I completely understand what you mean about school and big writing project (whether independant or school induced) taking a lot out of you creatively. I just now got back into writing (really writing for my own enjoyment) for my own story, thanks to you and the chapter you sent me btw since it inspired me.

    No worries about missing anything. It was really good, Wren. Everything else didn’t matter as much as the issues with the plot. And actually I’m glad you left a lot of the original material in there, cause I really liked it which is why I asked you to expand on it. And the issues with the Ledge, both very creative and much easier to visualize.

    Aw, thank you Wren *feels special* I’m glad to be back to editing too. I always have fun editing Dreigiau and also reading your writing about the character’s lives and adventures always motivates and inspires me to get cracking on my own. So also, thank you Wren for the opertunity *beam*

  6. Alpha wolf says:

    pen! you’re back!!! yay!!!

    anyways… she said everything about the story i have to say, and then some, so about that piccie at the top… it looks like soya, not asahi. just a tandom little comment.

  7. Aywren says:

    Wow… that would be SoYa with VERY VERY LONG hair then? :eek:

  8. Kumatsu says:

    Wow, took her long enough.

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