Ch8-6: Athrylith

“Back!” SoYa commanded, thrusting his staff forward.

“Back!” SoYa commanded, thrusting his staff forward.

“SoYa…” AsaHi was folding and unfolding her hands in her lap. “I’m really worried.”

The Apprentice was taking his turn at the afternoon meal, cooking small slabs of meat on a wide, flat platter. The color had begun to return to his face after being allowed another night of rest. The morning had found him able to move around with only the sparest signs of weakness.

“What’s wrong?” SoYa’s eyes flicked up at her for a moment before returning quickly to the food. He had a habit of burning things if he let his mind wander. Still, there had been a spark of true concern on his face that encouraged the girl to continue.

“I was thinking about the Marked…”

He drew in a sharp breath. Then covered up his reaction by flipping the slabs, one by one.

“And I was thinking about how they looked like they had once been students of Nefol…”

“AsaHi… don’t…” SoYa interrupted quickly, stopping her train of thought.

Something’s really bothering him.

She folded her hands one last time, peering at him closely. With just a few words, his whole disposition had fallen into distress. The way his hands jerked. The way his eyes settled on the fire and would not glance up.

He’s been like this since we crossed the Passage. I know he’s been sick but… it just seems like something more is going on.

AsaHi pushed forward before he could protest, “I’m scared for my family…”

SoYa’s head finally jerked up. The expression was one of surprise. As if she had taken the conversation a direction he had not expected.

What did he think I was going to say..?

Finally recovering, the Apprentice stammered, “That’s right… some of them were in Nefol.”

“I don’t know. Most of them were probably away on Tasks. They’ve all passed into Novitiate status, after all,” she told him. Then she smiled, “None of them could sit still long enough to be Dragon Apprentices like you. My family has the wander bug, you know? Mother and Father could never settle down in a city.”

SoYa smiled slightly in return. Then his face fell grim again. “Well, that wander bug might have saved them for the moment.”

“Yes… but what of the other towns? The outlying Gatherings? Is Nefol the only place that’s been affected? And how deeply has it gone?” AsaHi began to throw it all out on the table.

“I’m not sure…”

“How many were changed into Marked? Is the whole city taken? Did anyone get out?” she continued shaking her head. “I mean, obviously Zerom was able to influence TsuYa. And if TsuYa was wearing the robes of the High Guide, then that means that–”

There was a look of pained horror on SoYa’s face that made her stop, words trailing away into the smoke from the burning meat.

He looks so scared…

“I’m sorry,” she told him. And after a moment, “SoYa, you’re burning it.”

“Oh!?” he jerked his mind back to the present, pulling the platter off the fire with a mournful expression. His eyes lifted to her face as if to make an apology.

“It’s okay,” AsaHi interrupted with a smile, trying to make him feel better. She stabbed at a slab of meat and put it on her plate. “I like mine well done.”

“If… that’s what you call it?” SoYa poked at another slab, turning it over to find the other side equally as black. He sighed.

Poor SoYa…

The girl took a slow bite out of her meal, grinning slightly. “Well, if you imagine hard enough, you can try to believe it once might have tasted like meat?”

“Thanks…” the Apprentice murmured in mock-offence.

I shouldn’t have brought up such depressing things. He’s only just beginning to recover.

“I see the logic at work here,” AsaHi continued. She cutting off a slice, stretched over the small fire and stuck it in SoYa’s mouth. “You burn everything in sight so that no one will dare ask you to take up the cooking duties. Right?”

SoYa coughed, working hard to try to swallow. “Wow… this is bad!”

AsaHi giggled, watching the expression on his face fluctuate through the various stages of chewing and swallowing something bad tasting. His eyes watered a little, mouth turned up in a teasing smile of his own. Then his gaze slid past her into the swaying branches and grass that stood tall behind her. Her breath caught as she watched his expression transform once more, the good-natured cheer melting into a sudden fierce anger. His pupils contracted, his face paled, and his hand rose from his plate — palm spread outwards, five fingers pointed forward.

What..?

“AsaHi!” he hissed.

It was the only warning she had before the shadow dropped out of the tree behind her. Motion overlapped motion. If time unfolded, she could not see it. Everything became a blur.

Something invisible brushed past her head. Her hair swept back as it might with the wind — only it hadn’t been the wind. It was an unseen force that had come from within SoYa’s hand.

Mind Magic!?

Her senses reeled with the sudden realization that they were being attacked.

Whirling to her feet, AsaHi turned to face the ambusher who had dropped from the tree behind her. He was a man of pale-yellow hair, dressed in what looked like some sort of strange battle armor. A spiraled mark was scrawled upon his cheek in war-paint the color of blood.

As the girl’s gaze locked upon the attacker, she froze. An icy chill of shock rushed through her at the terrible vision unfolding before her eyes.

What’s happening to him?!

The short, curved blade dropped from his hand, the thud of metal meeting earth a dull pressure in her ears. With a gurgling cry, the attacker’s hands reached up to claw at his throat, like a man drowning in air. His eyes misted over, turning a milky white and rolling back into his head. Then with a heaving convulsion, he crumpled to the ground where his entire body began to writhe. White froth spewed from his mouth as the veins in his face and neck strained blue against the underside of his pale skin.

Finally he lay still, as if his body had simply given up, his breathing coming in low rasping sounds. AsaHi reeled back with a strangled gasp. Numbly, she turned to face the Apprentice.

SoYa ..?!

His hand was still outstretched, his face resolute in a way she had never seen before. There was a spark of sheer intensity in the depths of his green eyes. The power of absolute command.

“AsaHi, get behind me!” the voice hardly sounded like SoYa at all.

Staring into his face, AsaHi felt a lump of fear growing in her throat. Her legs seemed to turn to jelly, refusing her motion.

“Get behind me, now!” he ordered sharply, a tone frightening in its unfamiliarity.

SoYa rarely commanded anyone — not even back in Nefol. But now he stood before her, his stance firmly planted, not a hint of hesitation. His staff was upraised in one hand, ready to meet the group of attackers as they erupted from the surrounding brush. Shaken, AsaHi scrabbled for balance as she stumbled across the glade. She could hardly feel her body, her arms wind milling as blankets, pans and packs all cast barriers in her path. With a final frightened gasp, the girl dove behind the safety of the hem of SoYa’s robe.

The attackers closed in, circling their camp. Through blurred vision, AsaHi could see them – big-statured warriors, all bearing curved weapons and ice-blue eyes. Each face was painted with various spiraled designs that seemed to twist through the haze of her overwhelmed senses.

“Back!” SoYa commanded, thrusting his staff forward. There was a power to his voice that made AsaHi shiver, despite the fact that the words were not directed at her. Absolute, raw, indisputable. Control.

The warriors froze in their advance. Commanded by the single word.

The Athrylith…

For the first time, AsaHi began to understand exactly what the word meant. And what made the Athrylith so feared — the terrible power to control the minds of others.

SoYa’s upraised arm had begun to shake. His fingers were pale at the knuckles where they locked around his staff. The light from the staff’s stone wavered as the sweat began to bead on the Apprentice’s forehead, the weakness of his illness returning.

“AsaHi… I can’t hold them…” his whisper was frantic, much more like the SoYa she knew. Still, his eyes never left the attackers. “You’ve got to run.”

“I’m not leaving you here!” she protested.

“If you go now, then–”

“No!” AsaHi clung to his sleeve. All her determination packed into one word.

“I can’t hol…” SoYa’s voice wavered. He stumbled, face bleached the color of his white shirt.

Please…!

She fought to support him as his weight collapsed back on her. From over his shoulder, AsaHi could see the wolfish faces of the yellow-haired men as they resumed their advance. As if they had known all along that SoYa was weak and could not hold such taxing magic against them.

Oh, SoYa, please!!

AsaHi found herself dragged to the ground, holding SoYa’s limp form against her chest protectively. She could see the patchwork light reflecting off the dim blades, points of dark then light, as they drew near. No emotion. No reason. Simply death painted in spirals across their faces.

In desperation, AsaHi willed a wordless plea to the overhanging branches.

And the sky opened up above her with a vast crescendo of deafening sound. The earth vibrated under her. The trees swayed as a tempest swept through the glade in the form of deep crimson wings.

One of the Dragons!

It was huge – quite possibly the largest creature she had ever seen. Kudako’s Dragon form was easily dwarfed next to the blazoned red immensity. AsaHi’s thoughts reeled back to the first time she had seen a Dragon. She decided that seeing one right there, in the glade and on level ground, gave it twice the size.

It’s… it’s the Dragons I saw at the Cleft! I’m pretty sure of it!

The first Dragon, the larger of the two, advanced on the warriors that were making their stand against the beast. A trumpeting roar shattered the air. AsaHi was convinced that it shook loose every bone in her body. SoYa did not stir in her arms.

With a flurry of wild-eyed bravado, the group of warriors rushed the Dragon. They found themselves scattered with the first colossal swipe of its claw. As if they had been nothing more than annoying little insects at a picnic party.

Hedd-ynad!

Though the great beast did not seem of particularly vicious intent, it was obvious that it also didn’t mind dishing out a beating on anyone who was foolish enough to try to engage with it. Huge claws left imprints that spanned twice the girl’s height across the soil and tender grass. Trees gave way, crushed under the whip-lash of tail.

The thought of what might happen if it let loose with the breath of flame terrified AsaHi. Much to her relief, it did not.

The second Dragon, more bronze in color than the first, had not moved since it landed. Now that the yellow-haired warriors systematically began to retreat, it spread its wings with a practiced flourish and made a short glide through the glade.

The shadow was upon AsaHi before she realized, a large claw reaching down for SoYa. The Apprentice was pulled deftly from her arms. The girl was too stunned to do anything but watch as the Apprentice was taken off above the treetops, in the claws of the Dragon.

No! Bring him back!

That’s when the great shadow came again. Her frightened eyes shot up, catching the blurred vision of the huge crimson claw closing in around her from above. AsaHi let out a broken screech of fright, hands wrestling uselessly against the powerful grip. Staring down, she saw the earth shift, then shrink below her.

Her breath came in panicked rasps, body trembling all over. Zemi’s Servants or not, these Dragons were huge, dangerous beasts.

What are they going to do to us!?

That’s when the Dragon’s voice came. Vast, booming and jovial. “Sorry about that, Morh-AsaHi. Couldn’t leave you there. Those Spiral-folk were massing a swarm back in the forest around your camp.”

AsaHi nearly felt herself go faint right there.

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7 Responses to Ch8-6: Athrylith

  1. KJ says:

    Woooooooo… SoYa’s whipping out the swirly powers! I was really scared for them there!

  2. Agla says:

    *remembers a certain picture of SoYa casting that for a few seconds once wasn’t prezactly a picture*HO hum. Ripples and swirls and colours! Tell you what, I wish I knew what you Honoured Sirs and Ladies are up to…

  3. KJ says:

    Well, once I was involved in a plot to entice everyone on a role-play site to the dark side using poisoned muffins…

    What THEY’RE doing? I dunno, Agla. It’s a government thing! *nodnod*

  4. Agla says:

    In other news, that was a wonderfully written chapter. How long does it take u to write a chapter?(on average) :?:

  5. Aywren says:

    Ah! Thanks for the compliment Alpha! :o

    As for how long it takes to write a chapter… well, I do all my writing for Dreigiau during November’s NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month) in which the goal is to complete 50,000 words in one month. On average, I tend to write at least a chapter a day until I complete my monthly goal. Actual amount of time per chapter depends on the length of the chapter, how inspired I am to write, how much dialogue or dense description is included — I can put out a chapter in as little as 3 hours or as long as 6.

    Then comes the editing phase. I send my chapters to our friend Pen.. she looks over them and sends me all her suggestions to make it better. I usually take anywhere from 1-3 hours more in revising each chapter. Then the time it takes to draw the chapter sketch, too…

    So it really varies depending on the chapter’s content. The best answer is… I take as much time as I need to make the writing as solid as I can. *nod*

    Thanks for the question! Glad you enjoyed it! :D

  6. Alpha wolf says:

    so this is assuming that you dont have school during NaNoWriMo :?:

  7. Aywren says:

    I’ve had full time classes every time I’ve done NaNoWriMo. Except the first time — I think I was working then… hard to remember. Buuuut… yes. Yes I have classes during that time. Actually, it’s probably the worst time of the year to have something like NaNo… right during exams and before the holidays and all. Would have made more sense to hold it during the summer. :?

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