
LuShi began to take the blows, unable to fend off the coordinated strikes from two very skilled warriors.
The thick forests closed in over their heads as the group made their way as quickly as possible towards the waiting Vision Stone. Though the Stone was within view of the Shellab, there was still a good distance between. And unlike the winged people who had already made their way to their destination, not everyone within their group had wings. Or, in the case of NaDo, could use the wings they had to fly.
Kudako could see the pale blue glow cast down from the surrounding trees becoming more and more prominent the closer that they travelled to the Stone. There was a deep hush within the forest that kept his ears twitching and his staff held tightly within his hands. It was as if the living world could feel their departure and mourned the loss of its Arweinydd Patron.
There is no other choice at this point. It is escape or be hunted until death.
Kudako knew about this sort of mentality. It had been his once, long ago, when he was trained and unleashed upon the white-haired peoples of the Inner Realms as an Annihilator. He knew the gripping power that others could have on one’s mind, even when instructed to do things which were against a person’s nature.
Despite all this, the Dragon had no pity or mercy for the Sygnus. Zento’s words and warnings had proven to be terribly true… even at the cost of his own life.
This death is a meaningless sort… a harvesting of spirit power. A weapon of terror cast upon innocent people, tipping the world into Chaos. Perhaps the start of another great Mistake.
A calm silence drew around him as he felt a shadow fall across his back, reaching like a great dark claw that would rip the sun from the sky. The darkness that obscured the sky was not clouds, but a darkness that was terrible and unnatural, spreading like a starless night over the land.
Where the darkness met the horizon, a ghostly silver mist churned and heaved itself forward, casting the world in a cold and featureless suspension. It was as if the living had stepped into the world of the dead. In the center of it all, Kudako could sense him — the Dark Sygnus — coming to claim the last children of Nefol.
“Keep moving! Keep moving,” Lord Zemi urged.
“Don’t look back into it lest your fears overtake you,” Aur added.
Kudako looked back despite this. He had no fear to overtake him. With Zento and Sara both gone, he had little purpose left to him in the living world, save his loyalty and servitude to Lord Zemi. He was a creature who once breathed his last breath, given life again to amend for all the lives he had taken.
And so far, Kudako did not think that he had done this.
In serving his sentence, he was gifted far more that he gave up. He was given a reason. A family. A place to belong. Feelings and friendship. Love. It was more than a creature such as himself ever deserved.
“It is time to repay them,” the Dragon muttered under his breath.
“Did you say something, Kudako?” AsaHi gave him a questioning look, being the only one close enough to hear.
“Take care of Lord Zemi for me,” was his only answer. Then with a flick of his staff, Kudako swung about and leapt back in the direction they had come from.
“’Dako!” Lord Zemi’s voice echoed after him, strained and pleading.
“Keep moving, Lord Zemi! I will buy you time!”
Before anyone else could argue, he leapt into the dense cover of trees, speeding down the steep incline of hill. He could hear their calls following him. Then fall silent. Lord Zemi would know that they had to keep moving forward — there was no choice but to let things unfold as they were.
Visibility was strained the deeper he ran into the pressing silver mists. A chill began to creep over his body, leaving his feet colder and colder, making it more difficult to pick his way. It felt as if all the energy within his body was slowly being drawn out, much the way the spirits of the dead were feasted upon in the Dark Sygnus’ wake.
His senses were warped — sight, smell and even sound began to fail him. There was nothing but a vast expanse of mist and shadow in every direction.
“Sygnus!” Kudako lifted his voice in challenge. “Show yourself! Come! Do battle with me if you dare!”
A low, cold laughter mocked him from every direction.
The mists plumed up and parted as the tall, ghostly figure of the Sygnus appeared. He walked forward calmly, a fevered glimmer in his eyes. Bloodsplatered stains marked his form, marring the graceful silver feathers along his wings.
Kudako lifted his staff, grounding his heel for battle.
“You are worth nothing to me, Flawed Dragon,” the Sygnus spoke quietly. “You were borne soulless, your spirit was wrapped into the energies that gave you that broken body. There is no reason for me to waste my time on a creature that offers me nothing.”
“Perhaps you are afraid to fight one without a soul,” the Dragon’s eyes glinted in burnished, slitted gold.
Laughter came again, “Afraid? Kudako Re. You are a skilled warrior. But you have no chance to take me down.”
“Nothing is invincible. You are setting yourself up for a fall if you believe you are so,” he retorted.
“If that is your choice,” the Sygnus shook out the long dark blade in one hand. “I hope that you will last a bit longer than your student did. Master ZenToYa was no fun at all.”
Kudako felt a low growl rumble in the depths of his chest. Whether he could win or not, he would try. He owed that much to Zento and SaRa. Reckless as it was, the Dragon made the first leap forward, gathering all of his strength into the momentum of his strike. It was rare that he truly drew out his dragon-strength — except in the case of fighting something like the Marked. But with this foe, he knew there was no holding back.
Ignoring the sluggish response of his frozen feet, Kudako lashed and spun and danced, drawing intricate battle-patterns in the air and dogging the slashes of the slender black blade. LuShi was fast — faster than he remembered. There was a strange and archaic method to his motions. It was not something that the Dragon had seen before, certainly not something that had been taught to the boy during the training sessions.
It must be linked to that sword. Perhaps if he were disarmed…
The Dragon’s ears twitched as he redoubled his efforts, this time, concentrating on landing blows meant to knock the weapon from the Sygnus’ hands. But this turned out to be far harder than he could imagine — LuShi struck hard and fast with the intent to kill. Far too often, Kudako found himself playing the defense just to keep his head on his shoulders.
But his dance had been perfected centuries ago. He would not fall to any foe so easily.
It soon became apparent to the Sygnus that what had seemed an easy target was not giving way to his blade. The longer the fight stretched on, the more impatient his blows became. No doubt, the Sygnus was starting to realize that Kudako’s appearance was nothing more than a diversion.
“As much as I’d love to finish this the old fashioned way, I’m afraid my presence is expected elsewhere,” his silvery eyes finally narrowed, swinging with a tremendous blow that sent Kudako stumbling back.
As the Dragon fought to keep his balance, he felt a deathly chill grip his legs and begin to spread up into his body. With a snarl, he plunged forward, only to find himself held fast by the now-piercing claws of the mists. Long rends of torn cloth and blood began to form along his legs the more that he struggled against the hold. The cold, hollow laughter of the Dark Sygnus rang in his ears.
The black bladed lifted.
Kudako’s arms could not move in defense.
There was a pause — long enough for the Dragon to ponder his fate. Too short to figure out a way to avoid it.
As the sword whistled down upon his exposed body, the Sygnus gave a sudden startled shout of pain. LuShi reeled around quickly, the feathers of one wing scattering in a spray out over the misty hillside. Some of them dripped red with blood. Blood of the Sygnus.
A flash of gold burned through the mists as a shape nearly as large as the Dark Sygnus dropped down into the battle. It took Kudako a moment to recognize through his distorted vision — the calm face, intensely deep eyes, long lion-tail hair… and the flash of a strange, curved blade burnished the color of gold.
“Aur…” Kudako murmured. “You shouldn’t have followed me here.”
The Watcher didn’t answer. He moved through the battle with the grace of the wind, matching the Sygnus’ otherworldly battle prowess move for move. Whatever the style and knowledge was, it must have come from the Time Before. And when the mists rose up to claim the Watcher, it was burned away with invisible heat and golden glow.
LuShi wasn’t laughing now. In fact, he didn’t seem to be amused by his newest opponent at all. The deeper he was forced to concentrate upon Aur, the more and more the mists began to recede, until Kudako was able to shake himself free.
Released, the Dragon leapt back into battle, pressing the Sygnus from the other side. LuShi began to take the blows, unable to fend off the coordinated strikes from two very skilled warriors. Seeing that he had begun to lose ground, his frustration mounted further until he finally lifted one hand in a ground shaking command.
The mists responded, no longer mere mists, but embodiments of things that had once walked upon the living world, warped and twisted under the chaotic control of the Dark Sygnus. The sound of their wails and screeches was deafening to Kudako’s ears. The pulsing light within the mists began to fill his vision, distorting everything around him beyond recognition.
He could not see Aur. He could not see LuShi. He could hardly make out the brittle, ice-tipped shape of his own weapon in between his hands. All senses were failing him as the cold became unbearable. He found himself choking, unable to find the air to breathe.
There was nothing but mist — mist where air should be. Mist were sound should be. Mist where sight should be.
Kudako couldn’t feel it as his body collapsed underneath him. He couldn’t feel his arms or legs. He couldn’t feel pain.
There was a wave of numb nothingness. Mist. Then a final silent darkness consumed him.
Woo! Go Aur and Kudako! That was satisfying to read, I always like it when the baddies get a little surprise…
This was a very well written combat scene, as much as I enjoy blow by blow descriptions of a battle sometimes it just gets clunky, this flows very well. Cheers.
First things first – <3 Aur! Can't wait for him to find his old swording abilities in the other stories! Will he? Will he? XD
But… something about this chapter seems off somehow. I can't really put my finger on it. The action is well written, the plot is logical, and indeed it raises the question of if Kudako hadn't looked back, would he really have started pondering the balance of giving, despite his belief in his lack of fears? And he is doing what he said he would, buying time, at the cost of everything, even his life.
However, if he doesn't survive this chapter it kinda feels like people are just getting killed off. I hate to say that, but that was my first reaction, and how it appears to me at this point. Perhaps it's because Zento died so recently, and the nameless NPCs have been dropping like flies. I'll probably need the next (and final?) post in order to really figure out what's going on here – perhaps that will make it all clear.
Oh, and love the illustration at the top! It's fantastic!
Need… to… draw… Aur fanart… XD
I understand your feeling and have worried if reactions to the end of Dreigiau won’t be too positive.
The truth is… the end of this story has a lot of death. It does not end happily. It is the fall of the Old World Nefolian civilization — this was tragic enough so that the future remembers this chain of events with dread and Sygni are considered death brings.
Luccious is not a power to be trifled with — he is a creature that can bring Arweinydd to their knees. Kudako and Aur are strong but they (and other NPCs) cannot hold up against such power. Kudako knew that when he went to buy time. Aur also knew that when he came to Kudako’s aid.
While I won’t say that is the complete and total end for them (or Zento) for good, it is how their stories end in Dreigiau. As for the writing aspect of this chapter, this was one I wasn’t totally pleased with it and may come back to lengthen it (or something) in the future.
Also, keep in mind that the end of Dreigiau is not the end of The Story — things move on into Darkstar and eventually Wayrift. But Dreigiau sets the stage for how things got to be the way they were. Darkstar brings about the close to what Dreigiau began. Wayrift offers an opportunity to right the wrongs of the past… things will turn out alright in the end.
Well, I went back and reread a large chunk of stuff, mostly to do with Lucci, and I’ve become reconciled to this chapter. It works. You don’t need to change anything.
Poor Dako.
I can’t get over how brilliant this story is every time I go through it. It’s so vast, and yet everything makes sense and every scene is important. I can only hope that my own novel turns out half as good.
For instance, whenever I read about Zento dying, I just can’t keep from sobbing. That’s such a powerful and tragic moment. And just like the refugees, I can’t really comprehend it.
Though one of the bits I read – one of the introductions – had Zento asking to be a Dragon after he died. He changed his mind when he grew up, eh?
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I need to spend more time in real life, don’t I? : P
Thanks for leaving your second thoughts here, they mean a lot to hear. I don’t believe in any way this story is in its perfect form (I was joking to Syn last night that it took me 10 years for Darkstar and Dreigiau has only had 8 so far!). I’ll keep your initial thoughts in mind when I go through for a revision — I’m just not quite sure how to pace the ending in a way that works with the immediacy that’s needed + the vastness of what is happening with each character in each scene.
I may need to take some time to step back and get a feel for what can be changed. It took a few years for me to pin point how to clean up Book 1.
And yes, Zento’s changed his mind about the Dragon in his old age. His loss was extremely hard for me to write, even though I’ve always known it was going to happen.
It just occurred to me how much I love the slowly ever-expanding world you’ve built here, and I think this final chapter of fleeing is a powerful way of showing how far we’ve come. A story that began in a little cave expands to encompass a family, a city, several cities, a country, a continent, and finally, a dimension. I think it’s perfect to have them moving around so much at the end and emphasizing distances to remind us of the scope of this tale and tragedy.
That being said, I will be sorely disappointed if this is Kudako’s death. If that’s what happened to him at the end of this one, then I agree that it needs expanding. My main reaction to this chapter was in being reminded of the other main characters and thinking, “I wonder how many named characters made it out of Wyndor alive? Wonder where ShinRe is… Aur can’t die here, he’s in Shimmer/etc….” There’s been far too much character development for Kudako to let him die so simply.
I am also pleasantly surprised to see Aur fighting so skillfully ^_^ I’ve obviously only known him as a not-quite-Aur-kid up until now. It hadn’t occurred to me that he might be quite the fighter on his own.