“TsuuuuYaaaa!” KoGuRai’s face contorted in an animalistic snarl. His dark eyes focused sharply on the warrior, full of hate and fury.
“Did you forget about me?” TsuYa smirked. He coolly wiping his blade off on the edge of his coat only to find, to his dismay, that the black ooze ate right through the cloth.
“Turn around and walk away. This is between me… and LuShi,” the Champion sneered.
“Oh? Then why are you dragging little girls into this? Are you trying to break your record for hostage taking… the coward that you are,” he sneered back.
This time… this is it. This time… you’re not walking away alive, KoGuRai. We already know your tricks. It’s time for this to stop.
TsuYa ground his heel against the stone, poised and ready to strike. KoGuRai took a step back, nursing his wounded shoulder, both fists clamped tightly around the haft of his naginata. But before any blows could be exchanged, a shout rang out across path.
“TsuYa! TsuYa, wait!!”
The warrior gave a quiet curse under his breath. Things were about to get even more complicated.
“JouKa..?” KoGuRai paused, turning at the sound. It was strange how the Marked Champion could throw out scathing threats with the same voice that could sound so concerned.
The winged girl rushed out into the center of the fray, eyes wide as she stared between them. Then she stopped, peering straight at KoGuRai for a long, long time. For once, she seemed completely lost for words.
KoGuRai also stared at her, lowering his weapon just a bit. The silence between them was awkward and heavy. Finally, he took a step towards her. “JouKa… I’ve finally found you. Have you come to me at last?”
TsuYa made a blech face.
“KoGu… what… what… ‘ave you done?” she shook her head, taking a step back.
“Wait. Wait, JouKa. I can explain everything… just listen…” he approached, with hands wide in a gesture that spoke of harmlessness.
“Explain? Explain… what? The village ya razed? All of the people ya killed?” her voice was quiet, nothing more but a shaken whisper. “‘Ow can you possibly explain somethin’ like that?”
“Village…?” his face grew as pale as a Marked complexion could. “No… that wasn’t me, JouKa! I swear!”
“Then who was it, KoGu? Someone that looked like you and yer pet Esgyll?” she retorted hotly.
“If you’d just let me talk, I could tell you.”
“Then tell me about Mister NaDo. And about takin’ him ‘ostage. Splittin’ his back straight open. Tell me that wasn’t something that ya did, KoGuRai?” JouKa gave him a sick, pained look.
“JouKa…”
“You didn’t ‘ave to ‘eal those people — I did!” she snapped, not allowing him a moment of explanation. “I saw what came of it all… and I just can’t believe…”
KoGuRai fell silent, looking down at his fists, gripping the haft of his naginata. His hands were shaking as if fighting back some kind of internal violence.
“What’s ‘appened to you?” tears shown in her eyes. “I wanted to believe in you. But after what I’ve seen, all I can think is… you really ‘ave become a monster!”
The Marked Champion’s head snapped up with a bitter glare. The expression that had been concerned and shocked had turned cold and distant.
“I see what’s going on here,” KoGuRai’s voice grew low and gravely. His dark eyes shifted from JouKa to TsuYa and back again. “TsuYa’s turned you against me, hasn’t he? You’ve fallen for him while I was gone. You’ve fallen for him and you’ve betrayed me to him, haven’t you?”
“What? KoGu… what in the name of the Light are you talkin’ about?” she shook her head with a frustrated and confused look.
“You know what I’m talking about!” before she could pull back, his hand shot out, grabbing her roughly around the wrist. The air crackled red, furious Chaos. KoGuRai was losing himself. “All this time I was trying to find you again. I was promised that he would give you to me and we would take Nefol together! But you’ve ruined it all! You’ve run off with TsuYa!”
“KoGu!!” JouKa’s voice raised an octave, for the first time, real fear shown in her eyes as he loomed huge above her. “It’s not like that at all!”
“Are you Promised to him!?” KoGuRai almost roared, fangs gleaming as he pulled her closer.
“NO! KOGU! Yer ‘urtin’ me!!” the winged girl yanked back in pain. TsuYa could see the strength of the Marked Champion’s fist closing tighter around the girl’s arm. And he knew exactly how strong a Marked could be.
“STOPPIT!!” TsuYa leapt forward with a snarl of his own, slamming between JouKa and KoGuRai. “LET HER GO!”
The winged girl stumbled back, knocked free from the terrible grip… just at the same moment the Marked claw slashed out, leaving long, bloody gashes straight through TsuYa’s shoulder. He gave a choking gasp at the unexpected pain, dodging just as the claw came for him again.
Somewhere in the distance he heard JouKa’s scream and the choked cry of Suzume. The world wavered and shifted around him as his senses tunneled. Fury began to burn within. Everything focused on the dark winged figure of the Marked Champion before him. His rival. His enemy. One who would kill and destroy in order to steal everything that his family had sacrificed everything for – Nefol… his people… his friends…
I won’t let you hurt them!
KoGuRai bore down on him with blade in hand, a dark maelstrom of hate. His wings stretched wide, the twisted taint of Chaos choked the air. Animalistic insanity and bloodlust had transformed the Marked Champion’s face – if there was anything left of the son of JinRai, it was impossible to see it.
TsuYa floundered back, barely deflecting the blows that came again. And again. And again. His shoulder was in shreds, wounds open and burning with the acidic nature of the Marked attacks. His chest grew tight, breath rasping in his lungs as he fought to keep his feet under him.
I… can’t. I can’t hold up under this! He’s so strong!
Pain exploded along his left side. TsuYa watched, to his horror, as dark crimson fountained from KoGuRai’s blade as it tore into his body. His cry was wretched… so unlike the warrior he had fought to be. For years and years and years. All the training and hardship. Everything that he had strove to be… to be like his father. His brother. The ones that people respected.
And I will die like this… on the end of this monster’s blade…?
Eyes darkening, TsuYa’s face broke into a snarl of his own.
I refuse!
With an agonized groan, he pulled himself off of the point of the naginata. KoGuRai loomed over him, a smug look of triumph stretched over his face. The battle was won in his mind. He was merely toying with TsuYa now… doing everything he could to make the warrior’s death as shamed and futile as possible.
That will be your biggest mistake!
Distantly, he heard the sound of voices. JouKa and LuShi calling frantically. TsuYa could only watch with horrified, blurry eyes as Suzume rushed out between, little wings unfolded. She darted in, face angry and determined, yelling at KoGuRai as loud as her child-voice allowed.
Kid! What are you doing!?
Something grew deathly cold within his chest as he saw the glint of KoGuRai’s blade flash. The naginata lifted into the air, poised above the child’s head. So deliberate. The Marked Champion’s expression did not change… as if it was nothing more to him than swatting away a meaningless irritation.
Suzume!!
Fingers digging into the ground, TsuYa drove himself back up on his feet. He couldn’t breathe. He couldn’t speak. His body wasn’t responding. Everything felt so cold, as if all the heat had rushed out of his body.
I WON’T LET YOU!
A dazzling white light suddenly flooded the world. In the brilliance of the flash, he could make out KoGuRai reeling back, wincing against the blinding radiance. Suzume gave a shout, falling back in surprise, but unharmed.
His arms were around her. Just that sudden. TsuYa hadn’t realized he had the strength to move. But he was there. The little winged girl was safe, cradled against his chest.
Suzume stared up at him with awe. TsuYa could see his reflection in her dark eyes… he realized that the light was coming from him. Her voice was hardly a whisper when she spoke, “Wings…”
What…?
Stretching wide around him were wings of luminous white. Wings that belonged to him.
No way…! I’m…
Wings that looked exactly like Father’s. So much like Father’s, in fact, that TsuYa almost gave a shout for joy. For once, he could feel it… the endless possibilities. The potentials within himself. That he could be exactly what he had always dreamed of being. What he had worked so hard to become.
I’m Awakened!! I’m-
The sharp sound of a crack shattered his world. Pain. Terrible burning pain suddenly rushed through every inch of his body. The look of delight and awe on Suzume’s face shifted instantly to fear. With a strangled sound, he released the winged girl, stumbling away from her.
“TsuYa!! TsuYa!! Are you alright!?” she called to him.
He tried to answer, but no words would come. Nothing in his throat but a low, terrible growl. It bubbled and frothed its way out of his mouth, then shattered the air with an animalistic shriek. He clutched frantically at the source of the sudden pain, at his throat, just under his shirt. His fingers came away bloody. Blood that slowly turned black. Black like Marked blood.
NOO! NOOO!
Where Aur’s protective medallion had once hung around his neck, there was nothing left but a warped piece of blackened metal. And he realized, in horror, that under the pressure of his Awakening, the amulet had broken. It was destroyed.
PLEASE NO!!
And with it, his protection against the darkness had fled. Not even the power of Awakening seemed to be enough to protect him.
Please… please help me…
It felt like something was tearing him from inside out. His blood at once burned and froze. His body trembling as he convulsed, dropping him to his knees. He tried to cry out in agony, but nothing came except hisses and growls.
-No one can help you now, TsuYa… You are MINE.-
TsuYa’s flesh had darkened to grey, spotting black. His skin began to split as dark spikes of black burst through. A sharp rip as his coat gave way — his form growing and expanding far beyond his normal size. Black blood streamed from the bubbling wounds… from his eyes… his mouth… his nose… the Mark along his cheek. The darkness bled into his hair. Along the lines of his wings… until black feathers dripped with thick ooze.
And the terrible voice sounded in his mind.
-My Champion… greatness waits for you. Now come to me. Come to me…-
He fought it with every last bit of strength in him. Snarling and shrieking against the voice that invaded his thoughts. Everything was a blur. The world spun dizzy around him as the pressure of Chaos closed in on him. The sound of metal clashing, shrieks and battle were so distant and far away.
When he finally found breath again, it was rasping hisses. He stared down at his hands – now nothing more than beastly claws. And the thick black blood that ran over them. He realized the blood was not his own. Looking down at the ground, he saw the mangled and motionless form of KoGuRai’s body, the silver helm bent under the heel of his boot.
Is he… is KoGuRai… dead..?
Sickness welled up in the pit of his stomach. Sickness as he saw the blurred and twisted reflection of his face in the smudged sheen of the metal helm. KoGuRai was not rising. A pool of black spread around him where he lay in the dust.
TsuYa had won, he realized. He had taken the life of his enemy. But he had lost himself in return.

Nooo! Poor Tsu, Awakened only to find the Amulet couldn’t take it. But props for trying to fight it, Tsu.
*glomps*
Poor Tsu?
Baaah.. what about poor KoGuRai? He was left mangled by the brutality of TsuYa! He was defenseless, a victim of TsuYa’s nasty streak gone mad. If there is anyone that should be felt for – it should be sweet, KoGu!
Boo on TsuYa!
Brought to you by the Committee for the promotion of KoGuRai!
Dear Author,
Here is yet another one of the chapters which is written with a sympathetic bent towards the family of Ya. Yet, you fail to give other people (such as the Rai family) mentioned in the chapter, the same sympathy throughout this book. I am deeply disturbed at how the flawed TsuYa is treated as a hero.
And KoGuRai… can’t we all see that he is the true, tragic hero of this story? While TsuYa and the others decided to run away from the darkness, fleeing to the nice fluffy land in the clouds. Instead, KoGuRai is the only one who faced the darkness head on. This is contrast to a particular antagonist in this chapter who struck at KoGuRai when he didn’t even seem to raise a weapon.
I’d suggest that you write the true story of KoGuRai’s greatness and valiant nature. Otherwise, we might just have to twist and bend your story in our next great screenplay: Can we say….”Aywren, the Barbarian?”
Thank you very much for your attention,
-Mysterious Dark Elf
TsuYa is too short to be a hero.
Enuff said.
-KPT
Thank you Vake and the KoGu Promotion Team. I’m sure I’ll be parodied in the upcoming script of the “Adventures of JinRai.” KoGuRai has his own methods for revenge.
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This chapter…Oh my God. That’s just too darkly ironic. Aywren, you’re gonna make me cry…
That’s so sad…
You know, I can’t help but feel kind of sorry for KoGuRai as well.
And Tsu, yes, definitely. Awakened only to become Marked.
Actually, I think I feel sorry for everyone in this chapter. >.>
And everyone mentioned in this chapter.
Great job writing.
…Owch.
Great writing, here Awywren! NanoWrimo in 5 days!
Hmph. This doesnt change anything!
C: Psh. Grumpy pants Evil Mr. Rogers will remain Grumpy Pants Evil Mr. Rogers. Outstanding chapter Wren.
Tsuuuyaaa!
His medalion broke because of his awakening?
Iiiiroooniiiic.
…Yeah, I remember my thoughts here when I read this the first time. Here:
“…I suppose… I suppose it had to happen. But… not in that way. The shear irony that it wasn’t Tsu’s rage that broke the amulet, but rather his awakening, which was triggered by him saving the life of Suzume… so… wow.”
Excellently done.
Proofing:
“Are you trying to break your record for hostage taking… the coward that you are,” he sneered back.” -Missing a question mark?
“TsuYa could only watch with horrified, blurry eyes as Suzume rushed out(in?”) between, little wings unfolded” -I don’t know what else could have been meant…aside from out from between Lucci and JouKa… but if so it wasn’t clear.
Okay, comment time:
I like this part, it was a quite good battle scene. But, I have a few relatively important questions. One: what is Lucci doing this whole time? He faced down KGR before, surely, Tsu and Lucci would have made mincemeat of KGR, and they both had to know that. If it was about protecting Suzume and JouKa, I’m not entirely convinced, but it does work as an excuse.
Two: Does Lucci know about Tsu’s situation? I would guess nobody informed him of it, but… if he did know, then he has no excuse for not stepping in and letting Tsu take a back seat. That Tsu didn’t allow Lucci to deal with KGR doesn’t speak well for his thought processes.
Lucci had dealt with KGR before, pretty much, and I would bet that if Tsu had protected Suzume and JouKa, then the outcome may have been different. Still…
And for some reason I keep thinking, and speaking, “KoGuRai” as “KuGoRai.” I don’t know why…