Comments on: Ch15-9: Arch Rivals http://www.dreigiau.com/ch15-9 Thu, 09 Feb 2012 17:08:05 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Rose http://www.dreigiau.com/ch15-9/comment-page-1#comment-1778 Rose Wed, 14 Sep 2011 02:32:12 +0000 http://sygnus.lunarpages.com/dreigiau/?p=332#comment-1778 "Shutup! Like I’d believe anything that you’d say!” TsuYa spat, making the first strike. It's funny that Can and I would pick the same thing to comment on. I think it doesn't sound right because you mentioned somewhere that he has a "New Yorker" accent. Maybe it's too early for that, but my problem was the "Shutup"! because I kept hearing "Shaddap!" instead. I don't know, now I'm just being kind of weird. “Shutup! Like I’d believe anything that you’d say!” TsuYa spat, making the first strike.
It’s funny that Can and I would pick the same thing to comment on. I think it doesn’t sound right because you mentioned somewhere that he has a “New Yorker” accent. Maybe it’s too early for that, but my problem was the “Shutup”! because I kept hearing “Shaddap!” instead.

I don’t know, now I’m just being kind of weird.

]]> By: Canuovea http://www.dreigiau.com/ch15-9/comment-page-1#comment-1608 Canuovea Fri, 05 Aug 2011 03:53:53 +0000 http://sygnus.lunarpages.com/dreigiau/?p=332#comment-1608 Proofing: "“Shutup! Like I’d believe anything that you(delete:’d) say!” TsuYa spat, making the first strike." -I know it is character dialogue, but it just doesn't sound right. Proofing:

““Shutup! Like I’d believe anything that you(delete:’d) say!” TsuYa spat, making the first strike.” -I know it is character dialogue, but it just doesn’t sound right.

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