Comments on: Ch14-4: Shadow Falling http://www.dreigiau.com/ch14-4 Thu, 09 Feb 2012 17:08:05 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Canuovea http://www.dreigiau.com/ch14-4/comment-page-1#comment-1585 Canuovea Mon, 01 Aug 2011 21:54:39 +0000 http://sygnus.lunarpages.com/dreigiau/?p=302#comment-1585 Proofing: "Lucci ran straight for a long ways, the flickers of light and shadows flowing over the hall where windows shown in" -"windows shown in?" I don't know what is meant by that. Shone? (Past tense for Shine I believe, but sometimes it is shined. Weird.). This is more me than anything, though. Isn't shown "past participle of show "? Does that work? I don't know. Anyway, I'm glad I'm a help. Proofing:

“Lucci ran straight for a long ways, the flickers of light and shadows flowing over the hall where windows shown in” -”windows shown in?” I don’t know what is meant by that. Shone? (Past tense for Shine I believe, but sometimes it is shined. Weird.). This is more me than anything, though. Isn’t shown “past participle of show “? Does that work? I don’t know.

Anyway, I’m glad I’m a help.

]]> By: Tali-demonic http://www.dreigiau.com/ch14-4/comment-page-1#comment-251 Tali-demonic Mon, 24 Nov 2008 20:40:35 +0000 http://sygnus.lunarpages.com/dreigiau/?p=302#comment-251 interesting. go lad go to tsu and help him! interesting. go lad go to tsu and help him!

]]> By: KJ http://www.dreigiau.com/ch14-4/comment-page-1#comment-250 KJ Mon, 24 Nov 2008 20:40:07 +0000 http://sygnus.lunarpages.com/dreigiau/?p=302#comment-250 Gonna sleep... But it's fun to know I have a chapter to look forward to in the morning! Gonna sleep… But it’s fun to know I have a chapter to look forward to in the morning!

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