Comments on: Ch11-2: Earthian

By: Aywren

Aywren — Mon, 24 Nov 2008 19:06:22 +0000

Nope, that’s a typo. Thanks for letting me know about it, KJ! *hugs*

…aaaaand… it should be fixed now.

By: KJ

KJ — Mon, 24 Nov 2008 19:06:03 +0000

And this is why AsaHi is such an awesome heroine. :luv:

I did notice one typo as I was going through… or maybe it was intentional. Zento said “Try no to drown him” toward the end of the chapter. I can kind of imagine Zento picking up an accent in which that would be perfectly and grammatically acceptable, but since he hasn’t used “no” for “not” before, I assumed it was a typo.

Or maybe I’m wrong and Zento has a really groovy accent. Your call.

By: Aywren

Aywren — Mon, 24 Nov 2008 19:05:36 +0000

Well, the big difference is… Zemi chose his form and gave it to himself purposely, knowing exactly what he’d be getting into. And still at this time, Zemi’s form isn’t totally Earthian yet… he doesn’t have to deal with the trival things like eating and drinking and sleeping.

Aur, on the other hand, didn’t choose this for himself. He probably has no clue what Earthian life was… I doubt he studied it or really lived among the Earthians from his own interests (as Zemi did). This was all rather forced upon him (by a creature whom he feels is likely his enemy) and he’s pretty lost in the mix.

By: the Matagot

the Matagot — Mon, 24 Nov 2008 19:05:18 +0000

He’s in shock. AsaHi should of just dumped the water over his head instead of trying to get him to drink it. Or else she should of slapped him round the face.

By: Avemair

Avemair — Mon, 24 Nov 2008 19:04:49 +0000

LOL. Looks like Aur isn’t adjusting as well as Zemi did to his physical form. And then he gets to have his memory knocked out and has to live life all over again as a kid. Poor guy.

And yet, how truly lucky.

By: the Matagot

the Matagot — Mon, 24 Nov 2008 19:04:26 +0000

…Quite commendable, Zemi, but is it any wonder you’re coming apart at the seams?