-They steal souls, Kudako. Suck the heart right out of people. Then, they send the shells of men out on the battlefield. All in the name of their idea of perfection…-
His brother’s words haunted him here, in the homelands of his ancestors. The sound of the voice had faded in Kudako’s memory with the passage of centuries. But time had not diminished the meaning of those parting words.
-What they have done to you is wrong, Kudako. And they will pay for it.-
Instead, the passage of time had lifted the fog within his mind. And now understanding burned strongly, spreading like a fever throughout Kudako’s body.
-The whole concept of the Spiral is completely wicked. Everything that is done to our people goes against nature itself.-
Crouching silently upon the knotted branches of a blackened tree, the Dragon waited. He knew his challenge would be met in battle by the Armsmaster. Pride would not allow such a thing to go unanswered.
-I know you cannot understand that yet. I know that you cannot feel what it is I’m trying to express to you, Kudako.-
The Armsmaster would come. For Kudako was the last of the Re Clan. All of his people had died there upon the dark day that Clan rose against Clan in the Spiral. The day that his brother set his hand to action… the day that the Re Clan turned in rebellious uprising against the Armsmaster.
-I can only fight so that one day you… and our family can be free.-
Kudako could not remember why he was not one of the men that took part of that battle. He might have been out on one of his training expeditions. All he could remember was what he found when he returned home. His Clan’s homelands — ripped and scorched from border to border. Bodies were piled and scattered – men, women and children alike — left to bloat and melt under the merciless sun.
He had stood, simply peering over the destruction. For sorrow was as alien to him as any other emotion – the Implant did not allow Kudako to weep or mourn. And for the first time, something buried deep within his primal senses told him that the lack of emotional reaction… was wrong.
Though centuries had passed, the landscape of his homelands had changed very little. Nothing grew there nor dared to take up residence over the scorched grounds. It was likely that no member of the Spiral had set foot upon the darkened earth until now.
Kudako had returned to his homeland. And still, he found that he could not weep.
Instead, there was a building pressure within him, hot like flame. The taste of sweat and tension filled his mouth. For this was what Lord Zemi had promised Kudako upon his return – a chance at vengeance for the Annihilation of his people. Vengeance for the souls lost to the Spiral.
While Lord Zemi and Zento had continued on to the Keep to begin their encounter with the golden Lion, Kudako had remained there, alone. Upon the ruins of his homeland, the Dragon waited for the hour of his retribution to be fulfilled. Kudako did not have to wait long.
“I am here,” a guttural voice growled from below, like one struggling with the sounds in his throat. “Come show yourself.”
At the sensation of an approach, Kudako stirred from where he was hidden among the branches of the heavy-leaning tree. Feet balanced perfectly upon the thick bark, his golden eyes watched as his adversary strode underneath. Not even the wisp of his breath sounded in the air. All was perfectly still. All was composed and ready.
He had arrived. UragiRu, the Armsmaster.
The one that lead the battle to wipe away the last traces of the remaining Re Clan. The one who had spread his banners over the Spiral, claiming to be the next Armsmaster in the bloodline of Chieftains. Even the mark of insanity was there, having passed like poison through the generations.
Today, it would end. The prophecy, be it real or simply delusional, would be fulfilled. The boy that Kudako had trained, ZenToYa — now fully grown into his power, would rise up and strike the Spiral a fatal blow. And the soulless nation would fall into dust.
But Kudako made sure to claim UragiRu. His final vengeance would be carried out by his own hand. For all the blood that he had spilt upon the innocent lands of the Inner Realms, one last death would repay them all.
With the passing of the Armsmaster, the knowledge of the Implants would also pass. The Annihilators could never be created again. Kudako would make sure of it.
UragiRu, the Armsmaster. He was unremarkable in physical stature. Of normal height, a wiry build that belied what strength he might have had. But the years had begun to touch him – he had been quite young in the days of the destruction of the Re Clan.
However, time had done nothing to touch Kudako. Time had been his friend in non-passage, at Lord Zemi’s will. Another advantage that the Dragon would hold over the soon-to-be-lifeless body of his enemy.
The Armsmaster appeared to carry himself without fear. But it was a ruse. Kudako had learned from Lord Zemi that the very Implants that the people of the Spiral were forced to take… the Armsmaster himself did not. Therefore, one had to wonder about the virtue of the very thing that made the warriors “perfect”, without emotional blemish, if the leader of the nation did not choose to be like his own people.
The Dragon’s fingers tightened upon the grip of the dual bladed staff. The smear of blackness upon the ground made it easy for Kudako to pick out his target. The shaggy yellow hair of the Armsmaster was unkempt, beginning to grey with age. The various braids and attachments of his position seemed unwashed and matted. The armor that he wore creaked in a sound that spoke of little current use.
UragiRu, once full of the fires of youth, had grown careless and soft in his elder years. He must not have thought that any enemies of his past still lived. Had he remained cushioned in his fine home as the young warriors of the nation laid down their lives for the sake of his imagined perfection? It certainly seemed so.
All this Kudako could sense, peering down upon his enemy from the tree. Soon, it would be over. The dance of death and the final dirge. UragiRu would die upon the blackened grounds of the very people he sought to slay to the last.
Vengeance.
The Dragon dropped from the tree, landing lightly on the balls of his feet. A crouch, motion of silence, the dual blades flashing in the light of the shifting sun.
A distant explosion, flame light burst upon the horizon, coloring the bottom of the clouds blood red. Then another. And another. The Dragons had come, striking down the distant ring of outposts in deadly flame. Just as Lord Zemi said they would.
“The Annihilation of the Spiral has begun,” Kudako spoke, his voice flat.
UragiRu turned on his heel, a battle stance. His hands gripped at the hilt of his blades for comfort. It was obvious that he did not recognize Kudako. Not as Kudako had now become, a Flawed Dragon. But he would know soon.
“What is your interest here?” UragiRu’s thick voice demanded in a piggish way.
“Your blood,” Kudako obliged in a light tone.
Then the Dragon took one step back, a measured motion of pure balance. The weapon spun effortlessly between his hands, his crouch sliding into the circle of desolation that was marked upon the ground. Nothing would leave the circle alive.
“KudakoRe is dead,” UragiRu told him.
“No. He is not.”
“Then, KudakoRe has sent a hireling in his place,” UragiRu demanded.
“No. He has not.”
“Where is the one that challenges me?” UragiRu’s voice rose. There was an edge of a squeal upon it. The dawning of fear.
“He stands before you,” the Dragon held his weapon still, point leveled, golden eyes meeting the pale blue of his adversary. “I am KudakoRe.”
UragiRu took an involuntary step back. “You have been turned into a monster!”
“No. I have not,” Kudako began to advance, slowly. Deliberate. “I have been turned from living as one.”
“You bear the likeness of an animal!” UragiRu hissed, hands clasping the blades, readying for battle.
“And because of it, I sense your fear, UragiRu,” the Dragon’s voice grew deep.
“Impossible!”
“I know your secret,” his face had grown dangerous. “You turn the people soulless while you, retain emotion. Your false ‘perfection’ is a blemish. I have come to wipe the stain from my Clan’s name.”
“That stain of rebellion and shame can never be cleansed,” UragiRu growled, fighting to regain his composure. “Your brother wished to overthrow the Spiral and take control for himself. And you follow in his footsteps!”
“Wrong,” the Dragon’s graceful steps becoming more menacing the closer he came. “My brother fought for the freedom of our people. Just as I do.”
“He sought to destroy the very thing that has kept our nation protected and in peace,” came the gruff argument. “Our people seek perfection. And that requires sacrifice!”
“How would you know what our people want… they have never had the choice to speak freely for themselves!” Kudako retorted quietly. He lifted his blade, leveling it at his adversary in one practiced motion.
No more talk. The battle would begin.
Silence. Silence of the dead. UragiRu could see it reflected in the beastly depths of the Dragon’s eyes. And yet, he raised his weapons. The Armsmaster made a charge.
Kudako sprang to life, a death-dance design traced over the blackened ground. To his eyes, his enemy’s blades came slowly. It was nothing to dodge, duck, slip under the desperate swings of a man long-lost to the practice of the art of killing. It was almost disappointing.
Almost.
The only joy that could be found in this worthless battle was in fear. UragiRu would fear.
He would fear as much as the collective, countless souls that fell to the blade of the Annihilator. For each young warrior that failed the Test in the quest to perfection only to face his own bloodspill. For the loss of mercy and the rise of tyranny brought by a prophesy borne from the chambers of a maddened mind.
He would fear this much, and more.
Kudako’s weapon whistled high through the air. Quick, light slices. Marks of red began to appear across his enemy’s armor – too old and light to bear up against the onslaught of true vengeance. Fear began to rise. He could sense it, the odor thick in the air. Taste the bitter sweat mingled with the thick, smoky air.
UragiRu knew there was nothing left to him. Still, his pride would not allow him to surrender. Nor would Kudako’s vengeance allow such a thing.
Rivets of red flowed freely. Only a taste of the final demise. UragiRu stumbled back against the heavy tree, senses overcome by the tempest of terror ripping him from every side.
The sight of blood was intoxicating. No emotion left, falling back into what he had once been, Kudako only longed to see more. More. Just as he, the Annihilator, was created to desire. If such a thing as himself could desire anything at all.
The bladed staff lifted, a forward thrust of full strength, pinning UragiRu through one shoulder into the tree. The crack of brittling bone under ruthless Dragon strength. A shriek, nothing more than the madness of pain.
The blade twisted slowly, pulled back and thrust again. Into the opposite shoulder, this time drawing a slice diagonal, through the chest cavity. The wet sound of things inside bursting. Froth of blood coming from UragiRu’s mouth, streaming down his chin.
The Armsmaster could do nothing more than stare. Pale blue eyes locked in horror at the crimson-stained blade as it withdrew from his body, pulling with it things that were never meant to touch open air. His limbs spasmed, legs buckling under him.
The blade thrust again. Into the throat. Shattering the jaw. Ripping the last of the air from the bloodied mouth. A twisting slash let the head roll free. The staff swung around for a final blow and pinned the slumping body to the tree with the opposite side of the blade.
Stillness.
A pool of red crept across the ground, mingling with the black ash. The flames on the horizon had grown in size, the sky bursting in crimson, reflected in the thickening streams of blood.
The Armsmaster was dead. The price of freedom, won. The people of the Spiral would not understand the gift they had been given, he was certain. Not until generations had passed and the teachings of the Chieftain had faded into the haze of diluted memory.
The Clan of Re was avenged.
Yet, in the pooling of red Kudako found no solace – did he really search for such a thing? And if he did, when had that search begun?
Perhaps he had thought that upon the death of UragiRu something extraordinary should have happened. That the world would know of the passing of tyranny through some wondrous supernatural display or vast fanfare.
Yet there was nothing. The lifeless body of UragiRu slumped unceremoniously on the end of the blade, like any other. And soon it would decay away like any other.
In that haze of drifting smoke, Kudako saw the image of his homelands broken and burned away. In his memory, he saw the piled bodies of his Clan’s people laying defeated, left under the sky to rot. The distant buzz of his brother’s words faded in and out of his mind’s ear. And vengeance for these wrongs had been earned, yet…
It was not victory that Kudako felt. It was something else. Something that he could not find the words to describe. Something intolerably lonely and cold. Not at all the way one should feel upon winning back the honor of one’s Clan.
For the first time ever, KudakoRe turned his back to the battlesite. He sought refuge in the silent vitality of the forest.
*gasp* Kudako has a BROTHER?!
That was a delightfully, deliciously dark Dreigiau chapter, there, Wren! I loved it. I can’t pretend I didn’t wince a little, so dark was the imagery, but it was beautiful, stylish dark. Dreigiau LUV!
Glad you thought it worked okay — darker chapters are really tough for me to write. As are battles… though this wasn’t so much concentrated on the battle as it was on the consequences of the situation. I hope?
Omg, Wren that was absolutely phenomenal! I’m sooo blown away by how powerful this piece turned out! Wow, I wish I could really explain how deep I find this chapter to be–it holds this esscense of something beyond the fight, something that encapsulates Kudako’s character or really I should say the dawning of his character.
The background didn’t distract at all, if anything it brought to life the piece in ways I couldn’t even imagine. When I read the original piece it always seemed like the fight, and even UragiRu, didn’t want to be the main topic. It always seemed to me that Kudako’s own feelings, and discovery there of, was far more the focus of the plot. So this just brings that to light more.
Kudako having a brother made a lot of things fall into place I think. For myself, there was a moment when reading and just thought that everything made sense about Kudako then. Cause my main confusion from a few chapters back was how these specific thoughts about the soulless nature of the Implant and Spiral government entered into Kudako’s head. Even the way his dialogue formed (the repeating of bias terminology) seemed to suggest a parroting nature, but I couldn’t figure out who could have affected Kudako enough to do that outside of Zemi and I didn’t think Zemi would say those things or sound like that when talking about the Spiral. So an older revolutionary brother seems like a perfect piece fitted into the puzzle (though I must admit this gave me a sense of deja vu, cause Kudako and my Tenth have similar backgrounds now since my Tenth also had an older brother much like Kudako’s *wink* Kinda ironic too cause Tenth’s birth name was inspired by one of your characters.).
I’m glad you didn’t present Zento’s stand-point. What you did was much much better than what I suggested. And the way you added in Zento and Zemi’s happening, and also the status of the battle, made things much clearer for me, thank you.
Ohohoho, yes I do think
You’re really starting something here Wren, it seems like his growth is evolving into something fascinating and, in it’s ability to intrige and engage, it’s on par with the other main character’s stories. So does this mean Kudako’s growing into something more, kinda like TsuYa did? *hopes so*
Ack! Wren needs sleep! You’re gonna turn into a nocturnal zombie-person (like me *embarassed laugh*) if you stay up so late, heh.
*Hug hug hug Pen*
Well, it’s thanks to you. Your edits alway give me that little extra nudge to get me moving into things I didn’t originally think about. I started to wonder the same things.. where did Kudako get his idealisms. Why exactly was his Clan destroyed… What was the personal issue he had against the Armsmaster… it had to be something more than just revenge for the Spiral as a whole. Or even just revenge for his Clan. It needed to be something that struck home to make Kudako so fierce in his revenge.
I think I was in the middle of making a cheese sandwich for lunch when the idea struck me… maybe Kudako was carrying on a battle that was started by someone else. Someone that was spurred on by what they saw happening to Kudako… Someone that Kudako could respect as a warrior (since that is something so important to his culture).. someone that was close enough in the family that they could imprint an idea into Kudako’s mind. And it only made sense that it was an older brother.
Strange… I didn’t know that there was a likeness between Kudako and Tenth! But it’s interesting, none the less!
I need to send you the next chapter to edit.. don’t I? Anyhow.. thanks so much Pen. I’m glad the chapter did it for you! I really can’t thank you enough for all your help… though I suppose getting your edit finished would be a start. ^^;
Oh… and Kudako isn’t exactly quite as fleshed out as TsuYa has become… but he has a pretty solid background now. Much more so than he did when I first started to write him in Dreigiau. I think it’s noticeable… I know his character and his quirks in this book far better than the last. And though I don’t know exactly where I want him to go in Dreigiau yet, I do have an idea of some of his development for the future. So, yeah… some of this was news to me, but I think it all fits together in the end.
*hugs back* No need to thank me, really knowing that I’ve helped in some small way to Dreigiau’s growth as a story is thanks enough. And also, you allowing me to red pen Driegiau has a made me into the writer I am today, and that is more than thanks enough.
lol, funny how our best ideas come at the most random times, isn’t it? Something similar happened with me a month or so ago, I had this epphiany and it changed Ghost’s plot like whoa. I don’t even recall what I was doing, but I remember I’ve rejected this idea for a year or two now, so it’s very strange to me to be accepting it now. But it just makes too much sense.
I really hope will be as fleshed out as TsuYa someday, he’s starting to interest me far more than he did in the beginning (which is really saying something cause I’ve adored Kudako since I first saw your original character sketch of him). So I can’t wait to see what you do with him and where he’s heading in the story.
Btw, when did he get a cloak? He looks like he has a cloak on in your chapter sketch of him, or am I confused? Love the way his weapon looks though, will he keep that weapon or is he going back to his San-nun’s?
And yeah, Tenth and Kudako have something in common, heh. Usually it’s Ashen that reminds me of Kudako, but you perfectly described my Tenth when you were describing Kudako back there “maybe Kudako was carrying on a battle that was started by someone else.” That sums up Tenth’s goal in life as well. I wrote a story about it, it’s not finished, but I should show you sometime.
Yes, send me the next chapter whenever you like. I’m very much looking forward to what happens next! Oh and don’t worry so much about editing my chapter, take your time with it. I know you’re very busy and I’m in no rush for it. *winks*
Dunno about the cloak.. when I went to draw him in the sketch, Kudako kinda gave me the idea that he’d be wearing something more akin to what he used to wear as an Annihilator. I think he thought it was fitting — he might have hoisted it from one of the Spiral soldiers they offed earlier. So while I didn’t describe that in the chapter, I drew him that way in the sketch at the last moment. He probably won’t keep the cloak or the weapon… in fact, I think he will want to put as much distance between this happening and himself as he can.
Sure, I’d love to see more about Tenth sometime! It’s no wonder that you like Kudako then if he reminds you of your own figment! Kudako took a little time to warm up to the idea of development — he seems to be a figment that has to learn first hand, the hard way. And Zemi knows this… so a lot of things Zemi does to help teach Kudako are very much catered to this part of Kudako’s personality.
Anyhow.. have to head out to school. Always great to see you around Pen! ^_^
Wearing a cloak of the Spiral, using his familial weapon, having the duel in his torched homeland–Kudako kinda has a flare for the dramatics, doesn’t he? Hehe, it’s kinda a cute and unlikely character trait for him. I like it!
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He probably won’t keep the cloak or the weapon… in fact, I think he will want to put as much distance between this happening and himself as he can.
I had a feeling he wouldn’t. Just thought I’d ask anyways to make sure.
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It’s no wonder that you like Kudako then if he reminds you of your own figment!
Definitely, I feel like I understand Kudako and Tsu the most cause I write a lot of characters like them.
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Kudako took a little time to warm up to the idea of development — he seems to be a figment that has to learn first hand, the hard way. And Zemi knows this… so a lot of things Zemi does to help teach Kudako are very much catered to this part of Kudako’s personality.
Hehe, you’re changing my view of Kudako by a lot. He’s starting to seem a lot younger to me mentally than he did when he first was introduced. And, it’s very strange cause I had a feeling Zemi allowed Kudako his revenge in order to show him the reality that is contrary to his thinking. For some reason, Zemi never struck me as the type to easily condone revenge.
Ack, you have school today? How awful! Anyways, good talking to you too Wren, as always! *hugs*
Could’ve sworn there was something about wearing old spiral uniforms in this chapter….
In case there is any uncertainty about it… very nicely done here, including the battle scene (which wasn’t a huge part of it…).
Funny though, how Dako assumes this is over and done with… what if the Armsmaster had a child (or two)? It almost doesn’t seem so unlikely. This fellow had emotions and obviously had desires, and he was basically all powerful in his society… I doubt Kudako would kill a child, though…
you spelled vengeance wrong
Hm, you actually… described… Kudako pulling the guy’s guts out. Wow. That’s Shock Value for you.
And, for the record, I always thought of Kudako as OLDER before now, but this chapter made him seem YOUNGER. I guess it was the whole “getting in touch with his younger Anihiliator self” bit that did it.